Part One Inside Panel

Feedback: 

- I like the colour of the digipack, the glow. I like the effect on the hat, whereby there are a mixture of different colours contrasted together. I also like the lyrics that are placed on top of the singer and are showcased across the singers hat. (Feedback given by male aged 17)

- The shot itself is quite good as you can see the artist. The mise-en-scene is spot on, the hat represents the image of a singer/songwriter. I'd scale back the effects, it seems to tampered with, if you strip it back because it is the first album because the fans need to know the artist before they start distorting the image. (Feedback given by male aged 17)

- Perhaps change the clarity of it, not very clear. Don't like the text, not very clear either. I like the picture effect thats been used. (Feedback given by male aged 17.)

- The writing looks unclear, looks a bit blurry. I like the vibrance effect looks good and I like the way the artist is looking down and the hat is slightly covering the artists face. (Feedback given by male aged 17.) 

After reviewing all of the feedback given from our peers, we decided to change the background and the colour of our text as the white background was far too contrasting with the rest of our panels. This panel now fits the theme of our digipak as a galactic and more fun theme to cater for our audience.